good stuff
very nice. the variation is awesome. well written song.
good stuff
very nice. the variation is awesome. well written song.
I'm glad you like my song!
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Normally I'm not a fan of rave-ish songs. But this one was pretty well done. You obviously took your time on this song and got very creative with it along the way. Good job changing things up as well so the song never got boring.
Also, this song clearly depicts the purpose for which you wrote the song. Brings out some happiness. In addition, it kinda painted a picture of a person who has a struggle in life, and becomes motivated, now he's out to conquer the world!
Well done bro.
Haha in fact it didn't take much time; I usually finish my songs in max. 3 days' total time (if we count about 8 hours of work on the song per day, sometimes more). What takes time is to get inspiration and ideas, and of course to conquer my laziness ^^' In the case of this song, laziness and school were the reasons for the long delay between my demo submission (now deleted) and the full version.
Hmm, happiness generated - mission accomplished :P Thanks for the kind review.
great stuff
I must say. This is very well executed. Beautiful song. I enjoyed that is wasn't just a big repetition over and over again. You obviously took your time. Great job. You stand above the rest of the crap that gets submitted daily.
10/10 for pretty much being awesome.
- Joe
hey thanks ya this took me a while with the overlapping parts.
thanks for the great review
so i was thinking
very dynamic. the whammy adds quite a bit to your guitar track. the best part is that this song isn't cliche and predictable. i think you did quite well my friend.
I'm very happy that you find it neither cliche or predictable. It was really an exercise in simplicity for me, as I sometimes get a really good song going, but it becomes so complicated that I can't finish it. So to hear that it comes across that well is a great boon for me. Thanks for the review!
good stuff
I'm not sure what Fatal Distortion is talking about. Your voice is perfect for the song. Yea so your voice is a bit raspy. But who the fuck cares?! That's how your voice is.
You're on key and the guitar playing is great. And as for voice lessons... fuck voice lessons. Who needs them anyways?
This is a very well written song.
agreed, no voice lesson ever:)
cheers man
nice
great stuff bro.
i enjoyed a modernized version of the ancient egyptian sound.
my only complaint is the repetativeness of the song. it needed a bit more. i dunno what, just something more.
great job though.
haha thanks man, yeah i know what you mean, sometimes it just drags on a bit too long.... i needed to add a little bit here and there and maybe cut the length some, eh i probably wont re-edit cuz i lost the data for it so id need to rework the song from scratch....but thanks for the review, ill keep that in mind if i come back and make a similar song
peace
-fosterchild
err...
i like the first impact of the sound. i did eventually get bored after about a minute.
perhaps you could try changing up the drums a bit more often?
Yeah. Why don't you listen to the whole song instead of just one minute? The drums change
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